Cupid's Pitchfork

Simple yet complex. Short words for a long story.

Cupid's Pitchfork

 

So I kind of fell in love.

Broke both my legs in the process.

As if you haven't taken enough,

Half my heart is tucked away in your pocket.

It beats against your leg and screams every time you kiss her.

I can still feel it breaking.

 

-the Kate Vegas

September 25th, '07

 

 

 

 

©Kate Vegas

Reviews

[Don Coorough]

You let go with your feelings and you have a flair for the dramatic! Keep writing! - EllisD

[Mimozi]

You have described the piece in your synopsis pretty well. I think there is also a lyrical quality to it. It would make a great song if you were to elaborate on it some more.
I love the first line, the cautious, reluctant acknowledgement. Angsty.
I like it.