Estranged ...

A Poem by Roy

I look at your eyes.
A strange sensation ... Leave it.
You won't understand.

© 2008 Roy

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Cynthia L. Cavett

Oooh! Very good! It grabs you and then throws you away, I like it:)

Posted 18 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Annica Nadie

Very good haiku. And I'm doing very well, thanks; just a bit busy.

Posted 18 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gary H

Loved this. Opens up the question of exactly what you do see in someones eyes - and what they see in yours. Intriguing...

Posted 18 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Damien Dsoul

Subtle with the second line giving a totally ambigous meaning to it. Though I would have preferred if the first line had read: "I look into your eyes". Still enjoyable.

Posted 18 Years Ago

3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Shalini R

sad. but i think its universal.

Posted 18 Years Ago

3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 7, 2008

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Roy

Singapore

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