Victim of Your Love

I told you how I felt,
Unlocked my heart and let you in,
Piece by piece you won over my heart,
It didn't seem like it would ever end,
It felt like we would go on together forever,
Even though I knew it wasn't true,
I kept lying to myself,
The thought of loosing you almost killed me,
Then the day finally came,
My heart did not just break it shattered,
I told you I still loved you,
The only thing you said was oh,
Just like that you tossed me aside,
Only to exist as a victim of your love.

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh.. love can bring such sadness and pain... a feel such abandonment of a lover's soul in this flowing piece... if only we could just all fall in love just once with the right person! I truly hope you find someone who will appreciate your affection and shower you with the same in return one day! Smiles.. =)

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

this was really good i likied it

[puma]

WOOW that is lovely