Actually Broken

Actually Broken

A Poem by Claire

I pretend that I'm fixed

I pretend that I'm fine

But really on the inside I'm dying

My heart has been hurt

My mind has been damaged

My soul has been destroyed

I'm not like a free bird

I'm like a caged animal in the zoo

Just  there to laugh and stare at

You know the truth though

I see it in your eyes

I know you're always there

But it feels like you're miles away

I know you're always there

But I dunno

I really don't

© 2009 Claire


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I'm sorry you feel broken, its a great poem. You can really feel your emotion reading it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the way you state your feelings, it fits well with it title. The emotion of being broken shines though your work piece.

well done x

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 26, 2009

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Claire
Claire

Rockville, MD