Undone Dream

A dream of mine is to visit the old Paree,

Not alone but you with me.

It's cliché but, it sure would be sweet,

We'll walk, holding hands in the night breeze.

Off the bridge, we'll throw the padlock key.

And end the day admiring the Eiffel tower's beauty.

Author's Note

I wrote this for someone some time back. Sincerely hoping the dream comes true

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I haven't been to Paris for years but it is known to be a city of romance. I can remember there being a wonderful ambience there. Walking by the Seine and the Eiffel Tower are well worth dreaming about and I hope your dreams come true Yashika. You have some pleasing visuals in your lines as well as warm feelings interwoven through the reading.

Chris

[Yashika]

It has been a dream for years now; I really hope it comes true too. It's great that you've been to Paris, it must have been a lovely trip.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.😊🤝

[Chris Shaw]

I went with my Dad. A lovely memory:)

[Tepo]

I'm sure you will make it someday soon Yashika
A stroll along the champs elysees to the arc
It's as lovely as your words suggest
Enjoyed

[Arushi]

Can totally imagine and feel the love for the city and the person.

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of a travel commercial. Yes, Paris is indeed a romantic city, a place best visited with one we love.

[Yashika]

I didn't notice it sounding like a travel commercial until I read your review, and now I can't unsee it.😂
Thank you for reviewing :)