Autumn

Fall is a beautiful season

The leaves are changing

Cadmiums, scarlets, golds, and burgandys

The weather is changing

Not too cold and not too hot

It’s perfect outside

Nature is changing

The days grow shorter as the nights grow longer

The world is moving deeper into space

Winter is coming

Reviews

[Trevor Boot]

I love how literal it is!

[Natalia]

Thank you!

[Kenaz]

Good observations, but try putting a little more emotion into it. Try writing things, not as they are, but how they would like to be.
-K

[Natalia]

I have to admit that I wrote this about 3 years ago, but I absolutely agree! Thanks for the advice :)

[Kenaz]

I figured it must have been younger writing