Random Thoughts

Cerebral assault

    Thoughts attack at random

Then bust open the vault

    With ideas so tandem

 

Often I write

   With intentions to alter

Perhaps changing insight

   With no hope of falter

 

Separation by distinction

    Is a matter of perception

With mindset of extinction

    Regulates your perfection

 

Though I wish to modify

     My verbal amputation

Using myself to personify

    This form of education

 

I ponder depression

   Lessons I have been taught

It is perhaps for my protection

   That I have these random thoughts...

 

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

i am glad you use common words it makes for better works in my mind. If i need a dictionary to read something the magic disappears. I know how hard this is to set one in a AbAb rhyme and to use perfect rhyme not similar well done

[timthy]

once again...honored for the review..you are definately a writer whom i admire and respect any feedback you have to offer...

[Tate Morgan]

you are certainly welcome i havent been round much family stuff keeps me busy of late

[Shaquana Adams]

I enjoyed that ending. Nicely put :)
-QuanaWana

[timthy]

thank you, your feedback is greatly appreciated!!

[melissa]

This is a great poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more