Broken Love

just writing

Please don't say you love me

While you're happy with someone else

I wont try and get in between you

I'd rather just suffer through this

My heart is broken

So stop worrying 

I'll smile 

Not really feeling like I can make it

I'll laugh

Even if it sounds broken

Though inside

I feel like I'm breaking 

So I wont say I love you

Because I know it's true

When you say you don't love me too.

Author's Note

review please :D

Reviews

[r]

I know what this feels like...So effing painful to have to go through it. Sorry, samsam, but life just sucks. And now, for crits! DONT CHA JUST LOVE EM!? just grammar things...because im a grammar freak and it really bugs me. XD

"Please don't say you love me
While you('re) happy (WITH) someone else
I wont try and get in(-)between you
I'd rather just suffer through this
My heart is broken
So stop worrying
I'll smile
Not really feeling like I can make it
I'll laugh
Even if it sounds broken
Though inside
I feel like I'm breaking
So I wont say I love you
Because I know it(')s true
When you say you don't love me to(o)."

Lovely poem, samsam! (: