Free To Be Me

Free,

To let it go,

So I can be me,

Cause my past was my foe,

Free

Free,

No longer in a cage,

And everyone can see me,

When I turn the next page,

Free

Free,

To live by my rules,

And be who I want to be,

Without all the fools,

Free

Reviews

[Chace]

Let it go and soar. Spread the winds you always knew you had, but never knew what to do with. Test them, stretch them dust off the metal dust of weight.BE FREE!!!!!!!!

[potato]

Yes!! Thank you.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

You did a great job with the structure and maintaining the rhyme scheme. The message was very powerful too

[potato]

Thank you, I usually write with very strong messages.

[C. Rose]

Congratulations!

This piece is a finalist for Promote Me! VI (Peace).
As your reward I have sent 115 read requests on your behalf.

Voting is open until 10/15/14.
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Promote-Me%21-VI-%28Peace%29/50367/

Good luck and keep writing!

[potato]

Thank you!!