Righteous Path

A powerful run-on

I'll turn the chaos into blissfulness the blissful into silence,

Full circle comes around and turn the muted into violence,

Raining down with evil arms they're calling me a tyrant,

If history repeats itself, then I could use some guidance,

Show me where my errors lie, tell me I was wrong, 

Did I disturb the peacefulness and terrorize the calm,

Did I power up the weak and then paralyze the strong,

I did it for acceptance, so tell me I belong, but kwan,

It seems that all your actions were emotionally commissioned,

The path you seek is just, you must, trust your intuition

Author's Note

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[Lyingwithlions]

AWESOME piece!! So many great lines but my favorite for sure is:

"Raining down with evil arms they're calling me a tyrant,
If history repeats itself, then I could use some guidance."

[youngkingkwan]

The more I read this over, the more I realize how much of a puzzle it is. Not in a sense of confusion, but in a sense of how every piece has a place. Not one word more, not one word missing. Thank you for reading :)

[Ellie_the_Traveler]

I love this, your word choice is gorgeous and it flows so beautifully. Well done.

[youngkingkwan]

Thank you very much, This is one of my favourite personal pieces!