Rain's Renewal

A Poem by youngkingkwan

It Only Beats Quicker

A tender heart beats,

Rumble in the thunderclouds,

How precious the sound,

© 2015 youngkingkwan

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hanir

Very precious! Indeed! Nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago

JustinCorrigible

"Rumble in the thunderclouds" is almost onomatopoetic, I really like that line.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

Lasune

I like how this sounds like a protector overlooking someone they love dearly, very sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

I didn't write it that way but it definitely can work in that view. Thanks for the new perspective o.. read more

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Added on August 10, 2015
Last Updated on August 10, 2015

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youngkingkwan

Brandon, Manitoba, Canada

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I've been writing poetry and lyrics for several years. I'm looking to number one share my thoughts through words with other interested people, and two hopefully get some effective feedback and/or comm.. more..