One Final Kiss

A love that fades as morning mists,

subsides within 

one final kiss .

The pain within a last goodbye,

a heart in deepest 

sadness cries.

All alone now left to stand,

no warm embrace

or loving hand .

With arms out stretched they catch the breeze,

so broken hearted

on your knees .

Could there be one to hold tear ,

or cause your pain

to disappear ?

Could someone take this heart that’s breaking,

to bring back joy

that has been taken ?

Or is this thing you ask too much,

to hope for one

more tender touch ?

Reviews

[sonnie ibadah]

"Or is this thing you ask too much,
to hope for one
more tender touch ?"..... the desperation and longing in this piece is so touching, nice write and thanks for sharing.

[Aru Bansal]

Thank You.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. I like the need and the wish in the poem.
A wish for final kiss and touch. A nice wish. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aru Bansal]

I appreciate your comment, thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I really like this one. I connect with it completely. That's the way I feel most of the time!
Get out of my head! Lol.

[Aru Bansal]

Hahaha! ;)
I love when my poems connect to people.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Me too. I believe that's one of the many things that drives us artists and writers.

[Prashant Rajput]

I'm getting short of words to explain your writing,Aru you have a command over writing as a sailor has on his ship!...YOU ARE A MASTER OF POETRY

[Aru Bansal]

Oh! I'm really amazed to hear that, really. Thank You. Your review is special to me. ^_^

[Prashant Rajput]

yeah I really like it...

[Aru Bansal]

Thanks again man.