Freeze It

A (terrible) attempt to romanticize winter. I hate winter, especially when it is super cold and doesn't snow. So falling in love during winter is the one way to make the sad season super. :)

Flakes fall,

Snow hardens.

 

I fall, headlong,

Down toward you,

My hands flinging,

But I do not scream.

 

My mind thaws,

Since you came by,

Sheltered me from

The winter cold.

 

So take out your camera,

Snap and click,

Freeze the moment"

 

Freeze it:

As the flakes are falling,

And the snow is hardening.

Author's Note

First place in "Winter" contest. :)
Sixth in "Winter Landscapes" contest.

Reviews

[Viet Pham]

Congratulation on placing first in the Winter contest, it's well deserved. This poem is a magnificent work of art.

[ΨXO]

Good work. A simple, yet appropriate piece regarding this fine winter season. It's cute to boot.