Oblivion

Oblivion

A Poem by Dr. YumnaKay
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I live in a world 
where kindness is a weakness not a virtue,
where nations are hurled into oblivion,
where children are cast aside like thorn from roses,
where wars and bloodshed are laughing matters,
and where memes are the coping mechanism,
to tackle the looming dangers.

© 2025 Dr. YumnaKay


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Hello, Your story immediately stood out to me for its strong imagery and emotional depth. It reads like something made for visual storytelling. I’m a professional commissioned artist specializing in comic adaptations, and I would be honored to collaborate with you in bringing your story into comic form should you be interested. You’re welcome to reach me on Discord (lizziedoesitall) to discuss further.
Kind regards,
Lizzie

Posted 6 Days Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is powerful stuff. Well done.

Posted 1 Week Ago


I will always see kindness in others a virtue...even though your poem has it correctly...today's world has changed so much and not for the better.
So good to see you on the board again, Dr. YumnaKay.
been a long time.

j.

Posted 1 Month Ago



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Added on November 29, 2025
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Dr. YumnaKay
Dr. YumnaKay

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom



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