Mom and Moon.

A Poem by yusuf

"O Powerful Moon! Thou be the the second idyllic sight thine eyes hast ever drank. Swift down sometimes to kindle thy soul to eternal bliss with thy parlance of silence. Slumber thy mind to the same lullaby that dearest mother used to sing in thy name. Thou were beautiful then thou be beautiful now but never most than her! If thou hast divine omnipotence keep thy mother always in a eternal bliss , I plead. . For she dearest to thy heart than any mortal , count me too!
O the greatest romancer! Thou be the the second idyllic sight thine eyes hast ever drank.."

© 2012 yusuf

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Erinne S.

I loved the style of wording you chose! It was different and I like reading things that are different :)

"always in a eternal bliss" It should be written as, "always in an eternal bliss" My only fix for you :)

~Erinne

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thank You so much! You always redress my work so honestly and always leave me with a sense to improv.. read more

beautiful dreamer

you have beautiful word choice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thank You beautiful , You have a beautiful face. :)

13 Years Ago

thank you :)

DIVYA

Liked the emotion in the poem a lot. I love the way you make the mother paramount. A great attempt at a novel theme.
My suggestion, have two poems wth moon as the theme...One about the moon and maternal love, the second exclusively about the moon being the greatest romancer.
The thought process has begun superbly in any case. My compliments! DN