where do I belong?

This piece of writing is about a boy who lost his home in calamity and now works in coal mines.

Where do I belong?!
Walking days together in the evening smokes, blackened hands and a couple of chocked throats., all I see around is the burning cokes, here and everywhere..dim eyes and cold hearts., all I dream of is the open sky., a white collar is now a far away dream .. The flowing water., birds chirping the flowers and the sunshine., ask not what more I have lost ..my childhood my family.,where do I belong..? ., I too had a home, my school .,my family,my life,and my mother..oh yes,my beautiful mother..,I had things those belonged only to me..,I had a life..a beautiful life for which I did not have to pay..going to school., muddy shoes and playing in water..yes water.,that was fun .. Water that gave life..dreams.,and water that took away all my dreams,friends and my life..washed,drenched.,my home..all that was mine..my mother,all that is wid me are those beautiful memories..moments of the past,and a beating heart..,a glimpse of all the beauties we have but never respect ..and water,.yes the pain in my eyes ! _Surabhi #zeal

Reviews

[erframan]

Well, I can capture your sadness and anger, also some irony in here. It's well written zZeal, your emotion reach me while I'm reading this :)

[zZeal]

Hey thank you very much erfman for the review :)

[J Johnson III]

Water is a very important part of life and I think you captured it here. Good writing it was a pleasure to read.

[zZeal]

Thank you :)