Rain

Rain is just over

Cool breeze blows in darkness

Frogs sing to charm lovers

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

This reminds me of summers spent down by the river in Poland..its just like that, I see the tall grasses ornamented with dew swaying in a light breeze, the dragonflies, the sound of frogs croaking and jumping, the scent of warm, wet earth and the song of dancing river.

[zainul]

I feel blessed that this little poem could remind you of so many events of the summers of Poland.Thanks for the great review.
I am also fond of dragonflies.They were my playmates in my childhood.I used to catch the red colored ones and tie a thread with its tail and then fly them in the air like kites.They also resemble helicopters when on flight.
Thank you again for the lovely words.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

It was my pleasure :)

[zainul]

Thanks a lot

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Beautiful imagery!

[zainul]

Thanks for the great review,Beth.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thank you for calling it great, though it's only a couple of words. Anyway, the piece is beautiful.

[zainul]

Your couple of words mean world to me.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Well great then!! I'm glad that a few words can make someone so happy.

[zainul]

The reverse may also happen.
Few words can make someone very unhappy.
Families may breakdown.
War may be waged.
Life may be miserable.
We are happy with words that make us happy.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I know what you mean. Sorry it took me so long to respond, I was working on the prologue for one of my unfinished books.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Charming piece. I am smitten.

[zainul]

Lovely review.
Thank you very much for the lovely inspiring words.

[Skye]

Nothing can beat the simplicity of haiku. Yours is beautiul, and the mental image you wove into my mind is amazing. Loved it.

[zainul]

I am grateful for your lovely review and compliments.
Best regards,
Zainul

[zainul]

Lovely Haiku...
Those have musical notes
Always

E.L.

[zainul]

Great review in poetical mode.
Thanks a lot.