Pigeon

Pigeons allure me to dream for peace

Happy pigeons fly

They are tumbling in the sky

Let's give peace a try

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

one time, they, gave peace a try, right on my head..

lovely little critters though.. there used to be a flock of 12 that buzzed around the neighborhood.. when my son was little he used to laugh when i called them, the dirty dozen which was an old army movie of a bunch o ne'r do wells haha

good stuff here my friend.. love the wonderful thought.. it brought back a great memory..

:)

[Allyson Wolfe]

I love this haiku! There's even rhyme, which is seldom found in pieces. This simplistic piece is still so enthralling!

[zainul]

Thank you,Allyson,for the admiring review.
I feel very encouraged by your generous words.

[Corset]

what a beautiful Haiku, I love the free flying, tumbling feel of it...peace :)

[zainul]

Thank you,Corset for the admiring review.
Your lovely words add motion to the piece :)

[zainul]

Thanks for the inspiring review.

[RoyalVirtue]

Nice short poem! Even though so short it the way it's written and the style is beautiful! Good work!