Poem

Engaged in the process of creation

Sense seems overcast

Restless words race in my brain

Poem will be born

Reviews

[Imara]

Ha a nice quick poem about our feelings of inspiration. Great job. I love that you don't end with a period, it gives it that "To be Continued" feel like you're not done these feelings will never be done. Perhaps I'm reading too much into this. Again excellent job :)

[zainul]

You have a great heart that knows how to make me happy with lovely words:)
Thanks for the inspiration,dear friend.

[Imara]

Oh you're welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Just Kim]

very nicely written and said

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review :)

[SyberRose]

As soon as the water breaks from the clouds a new poem will be born...ha
Writing poetry always gives us something to look forward to...SyberRose

[zainul]

Thank you SyberRose for such a lovely interpretation.
You are absolutely correct to say that writing poetry always gives us something to look forward to.The idea may differ from person to person,I think there exists a kind of the activities in the brain or mind in the process of the birth of a poem.
Thanks for joining the lovely conversation.

[Marie]

And you gave birth to a fine senyru. Congratulations.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for being a witness to celebrate the birth of a senryu.
I feel very honored by your congratulatory remarks :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and it will be "natural birth" no mid-wives allowed.

[zainul]

Thank you Jacob.
You have witnessed the birth of a poem.
I feel very blessed that you are here to bless me :)

[Emily Feret]

Another great piece!

[zainul]

Thank you Emily for being so kind to review this little piece.
I feel very honored for considering this as a great piece :)