If I talk to you?

If I talk to you
What will you say back to me

I feel so confused

Reviews

[Voice11]

I think this is a good little poem. It leaves the mind open to ideas. But gives the general ipression of someone worrying what another will say to them if they speak.

[Guardian]

I think it definitely needs to be longer. There are some emotions brewing underneath, but if you add more I think it could become so much more powerful.

[blonde girl]

this is very short but without a message