The real me

you see people how you wont to and not how they are.

You see me as a leader,

But yet you do not know,

What you see is a mask that i show,

For i am not strong as you may see,

I live in the shadows,

That you can't see,

For i fear my pain has cut so deep,

I make walls around me,

For i may look strong as the eye can see,

But for i am just plane me,

I let no one in to see,

How sad my life can be,

Hiding in a fake reality,

Being what you think you see,

Cuts so deep into me,

That i feel trapped and can not breath,

Author's Note

please review if know someone like this

Reviews

[zainul]

Truth expressed so nicely.
Great write.

[Rochelle]

thank you very much

[zainul]

You are always welcome :)

[Lassian Willow]

GREAT...................................

[Rochelle]

thanks

[Tea]

It's really good :)

You need to fix a little bit of it but apart form that it was AMAZING!!!

[Rhianne Ney]

Hiding in a fake reality,
Being what you think you see,
Cuts so deep into me,
That i feel trapped and can not breath,
_these are all powerful lines here_

I like the poem because of its great message.
The only thing that is needed here is for people to read this (:

This is a real great piece (:

Anyways, if the narrator here never removes her mask it would stick to her skin and might take some once she took the mask off. There's a limit to pretension after all...

[Rochelle]

thank you for that you make me feel like i wont to come out of the shadows

[Rhianne Ney]

Oh, please do come out, it may be good for writing but it's still great to stay in the light (:

[Rochelle]

your so true but just not yet

[Rhianne Ney]

But don't stay there for so long you might get used to it!

[Rochelle]

i think i am but to me the shadows is were i belong it's like home to me

[Rhianne Ney]

Sure though, but sometimes we just need the light, but I won't force you anymore if you don't want to (:`

[Rochelle]

thank you for understanding but have i meet u before if not i wish i had

[Rhianne Ney]

You're Zoanne, right? one of Willow tree's friends, by the time she asked for us to add the two of you to our list of friends, I already checked you out, Though I'm pretty attached to Wolfgirl who like you, changes her profile name also (:

But either way, I'm glad to meet you, even though we should've talked before (:

~Rhianne Ney~

[Rochelle]

i will no longer change my name for this name i have means the start of a new friendship

[Rhianne Ney]

Oh, is that so? Thank you then *virtual handshake*
Just PM me when you need anything (:

[Rochelle]

thanks your like no one i have ever meet before you seam to under stand

[Rhianne Ney]

Is that so? I've heard this also before but yes, I always try to understand because not everyone are understood, though sometimes, I just let all the blood flow in my head I still give space for some thinking (: