Don't wait

Don't wait to be set free.

If I tell you a story of sorrow and pain,

Will you show me mercy of the life I have ganed,

If I give you my thanks and all of my love,

Will you throw it up to heavens ubove,

So remember me and all I have done,

As I walk on the clouds and look down at the sun,

Forget the darkness I leave behind,

Remember the shadow the shelters your light,

I am happy,

I am me,

Now don't wait for someone to set you free.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"f tell you a story of sorrow and pain,
Will you show me mercy of the life I have gained,
If I give you my thanks and all of my love,
Will you throw it up to heavens above,"


A splendid read and write...Bravo.................

[Rochelle]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Justin]

that was really great, it has alot of emotion in it, it tells a great story :)

[Rochelle]

thank you very much

[Justin]

your welcome, keep it up :)