Creator

Creation & the creator

A garden erupted from

inside of me and it 

seemed to be the only

beauty anyone ever 

commented on.

Everyone loves the creation

but never the creator.

Daisy and roses

which bloomed 

and everyone picked

for their lovers. 

Everyone loves the creation

while destroying the creator.

Author's Note

:) - Melody x

Reviews

[Abraham George]

simple words can create magic and you once again proved it here

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this it's so true very well written

[Prashant Bajpai]

very well penned i l loved your writing

[Hope]

This is a thought provoking poem.
It can have many interpretations.
You are a unique and bold writer Melody:)

[Sofia]

This is so true..I really love this..it's really beautiful...well written...and well versed ...keep writing :)

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, we never do appreciate the creator, but only love the creation...lovely poem, well done.

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is great!! I really like this piece:)

[wordman]

and you are right,and more so every day

[Kate mccracken]

I really loved the metaphor. This is beautifully written and it has a very strong message that makes it all the more worth reading.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautifully written...i loved this.