Silver

Silver & Gold

We are rejected

silver lovers who may get 

thrown away for gold.

Author's Note

I may not be posting a lot the next two weeks. I'm very busy. - Melody x

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

After reading your wonderful haiku, I had a vision of some old git trying to get a younger lover - good luck with that is want came to mind. Great write, nicely penned!

[wordman]

but we might be gold allready

[Hope]

That's right.
Good haiku dear Melody

[rowan.taylorrr]

very wonderful!! i love it

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ahaaa!!....
wonderfully wonderful....keep writing.

[Abraham George]

Again a good one from our Haiku Queen.

[z.chéri]

Too kind x

[Damien Ridge]

Very powerful statement. Reminds me of Fight Club in a way. You may not understand where I'm coming from with that unless you've seen the movie. Anyways it's great, thanks for sharing!

[Sofia]

Love this..heart wrenching one...your haiku's are all so lovely..

[Najam Us Saher]

I loved the metaphor you have used here. Very heart touching haiku.