Mortal

Bound to feel and bound to die.

I am a mortal;
bound to feel,
bound to die,
just like you.

Author's Note

:) - Melody x

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Having a transitory life should make us kinder towards each other - but alas - as you poetically wrote - some people never learn! Kudos ...

[Joey Nizz]

Us mortal have more than hundred way to feel with our emotions.

Thank you for reminding us of who we are.

[Nicholas Shea]

A good reminder that people aren't so different and our time is up one day. Great piece!!

[wordman]

we are made of feelings and emotions that can
take us anywhere our hearts and mind wanders

[Mr.Writer]

An emotional and engaging poem!
You described all the emotions and feeling in this really clear!
Well done, keep it up!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautiful it is...i loved it and keep writing.

[z.chéri]

Thank you!

[Abraham George]

nice and filled with true emotions that expressed in a best way.

thanks for sharing

[z.chéri]

Thank you!

[Abraham George]

don't thank me. you deserve it

[Najam Us Saher]

Very correct. I really liked this. Heart touching and loved the way you expressed true emotions.

[z.chéri]

Thank you!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.