Weary

She was a delicate

blooming rose �"

Loved by so many

but picked apart

when someone 

was weary of her

presence.

Author's Note

This is an excerpt of a poem i recently wrote. - Melody

Reviews

[Nora]

Outstanding, gorgeous short poem :)

[Abraham George]

nice . short and cute, ..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is an exceptional poem....its outstanding and i love it...
its too short and that is what makes this an effective one.
and also the words u used here were simply amazing.


keep writing

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

That's beautiful it can relate to the late princess Diana

[Priyanshi]

An excerpt, and very meaningful..and beautifully written.

[Najam Us Saher]

Very thoughtful, beautifully penned. I liked it.

[wordman]

emotional,sad write,her petals are falling off

[Mr.Writer]

An emotional, powerful and delicate poem!
You beautifully described the girl and let us imagine her and the people weary of her presence!
Well done, keep it up! :))