Too

Roses wilt but they
           soon will bloom and you must know
you are like a rose. 

Author's Note

:) Thank you for all the reviews. - Melody x

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is truly special
unique and pure

[Tony Jordan]

Wilted roses lack sunlight or water or have reached the end of their life - with sunlight or water they can come back but if the end of life has been reached then they are gone, which is the reason I took for this rose to wilt and the bloom is going to take place in the hereafter. In that case this poem has a lot of spirituality embedded Melody. Well penned.

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words are as pleasing as rose. :)

[Zoya]

Wow...love your creativity here. Nice thought. Keep writing

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is just beautiful.... keep it up.

[wordman]

yes we are,and you put vivid images in my mind

[Mr.Writer]

Such positivity in your poems Melody!
Well done, keep it up :))

[Priyanshi]

I always love your haikus.
even this is also great.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Cleverly worded and blissfully creative … love the text highlighting to reveal the theme of this piece… ‘Too’ nice to comment further ……….