Forever Ago

It never worked.

Forever ago

I laid under the sun so

I could shine like you.

Author's Note

Met a cool person this weekend who loves and writes poetry. :) - Melody x

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this conjures up my childhood
I know you probably didn't write about childhood but you probably wrote about a lover
this conjures up me lying on the beach next to my sister who tanned so well, I didn't tan I burnt
good poem short but sweet does it

[Nora]

This is sooo sweet , i loved how it short and effective :)

[wordman]

but instead i got all brown,well after the red went away

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. Perfectly written, nice words.

[z.chéri]

You're very kind. Thank you!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.