Vision

A point in prose

It doesn't matter much to me
Where you may be looking
It only really matters what you see
If three are watching
One will see,
a wash of colors, beauty breathes
Two will see only the Bee

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Greg Agee,
"vision"
I like your author's note above: "A point in Prose."
For me, the ability to catch the whole song is where it's at, what is important.
Do we take in the whole painting or see the center meaning which all the colors support?
"If three are watching
one will see,
a wash of colors,beauty breathes
Two will see only the Bee.
Also as you state at this poem's start:
"it doesn't matter much to me
Where you may be looking"
this is so interesting, as we all do focus on diferent aspects for differing reasons. This poem is a analytical pondering on how different we all are and how we all interpret any given poem or even painting or anything.
I had fun with this one for sure!
Bless ya!
Kathy