Up Into You

Dreamtime Romance

It's a beautiful day not to lose you.
You have made this love, so true.
Your all in this love with me.
Now I owe my whole world to you.
My wish, my dream my all, is you.
You've taken me up into you.
All that I do,
is because of all that is you.
You've made my dreams come true.
I'm all in it with you.
I've taken you up into me.
You've taken me up into you.
Now nothing I'll ever do.
Will have any reason.
Without you.
You're all I've ever wanted.
My dream come true.
My heart, my soul, my all is you.
You've taken me
up into you...

Author's Note

Just a dream

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a very poetically written declaration of someone who is drunk in love or perhaps losing himself in love or maybe he's just been so well screwed, he's delirious in lust. I think there are many love poems written that sound a lot like this. The most original aspect of your poem is the title & the way you've repeated it thru-out, with good effect, to emphasize a person being totally swept up by his beloved. While this is beautifully written, it's not my favorite kind of love poem. To me, this feels like the description of a love addiction, rather than a true, deep meaningful love where the participants come alive for the reader, with details of a real human being & anecdotes of time spent together & visual images to help us really SEE what this great love is all about for the narrator.

[Greg Agee]

Irs actually a prelude to a song and iy is anout new love overboard, So their wasn't much else to tastefully say. I never disagree with you. Cause your always right..... Thanks

[Mary Helda]

This is the kind of poem that can be recited with jazz music to accompany it....a perfect portrayal of love....beautiful piece:-)

[Greg Agee]

Thank You so much !

[Mary Helda]

You are welcome

[Mary Helda]

This is the kind of poem that can be recited with jazz music to accompany it....a perfect portrayal of love....beautiful piece:-)

[Érenn]

This is more than just a dream a wish maybe. A desire wanting to be fulfilled or already fulfilled. The writing clear, the meaning crystal clear. My feelings full of happiness and hope ^^ I enjoyed the read

[Emily]

I love the meaning!!
Keep up the great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel of song in these words. Nice flow of thoughts in the hopeful poetry. I like the positive drive and hope in the words. Thank you Greg for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Greg Agee]

Your reviews are like poetry. Everything on here has been produced in the last three weeks. I'll only add new prose. Some of the later ones I'm learning to like. Thank You so much my friend

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Leran Vakem]

I like this. The emotions in this is well visible.
I really liked reading it.

L.V.

[Greg Agee]

In appreciate that very much, thanks !