Lesson Learned

Gone are those words written out of pain

Gone like dirt washed away by the rain

Those words channeled after a meeting from the past

Those precious thoughts were not meant to last

At least not here in this world wide web

But this is where I have been led

I know now what to do so this happens no more

It's what a piece of paper and a pen is for

Make copies of your words or better yet, write a book

So next time this won't be you taking your last look

Reviews

[Nik]

Sounds like drama surrounding posting on the net - I'm sure the book will be fantastic!

[Ally]

wow that was beautiful! very well written! i thoroughly enjoyed that! nice work :)

[Wicahpi]

"Amen"! Short, sweet and to the point. Well done!
Happy Tales...

[Poetic82]

Life is full of lessons, the key is to learn it, so you only live it once. Because history definately repeats itself. That saying is repeated and it's also true. Great write.

[The Mad Prophet]

Very expressive on your creativity. Carve your name in stone before you go, so very true. I this one, it was well writen, and the meaning we all here can relate with :)

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Ironically I am also a nonconformist and can think outside of a box, and I wrote a poem called Lesson Learned! haha
I enjoyed it, Shell

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Great advice especially since the site crashed and erased everything. Great rhythm and rhyme in this piece. Thank you. Quite enjoyable.
Light,
Siddartha

[Clarisse Nanoit]

I like this. It's a theme often found in writing (redemption through various therapies). I'll have to share this with some friends. Very great piece!
KH