Saturn Has Returned

Affected by the stars

Affected by the moon

Affected by the planets

Affects in my mood

 

We usually look to the sun

The westerners in astrology

But what about the moon?

The closest thing we see

 

Now Saturn has returned

To its original birth place

Many lessons to be learned

Getting ready for change

 

Too demanding to ignore it

Too important to pass by 

Too understanding not to get

Even if we try

 

The moon tells our emotions

Saturn tells our fate

The sun tells our motions

Incredible what we create

Author's Note

in the middle of my Saturn Return... a time of life changes and reevaluations of one's life... major decisions and major changes happen

Reviews

[Treasaigh (The Solitar..]

I love this Zee=) My oldest son is having a fit over it as well lol=D He will be a scientist one day I'm sure. It is amazing you wrote this..we were talking about baby names and my son said when he grew up and got married he wanted to name his child Saturn..I thought that was neat. This is a very unique poem. Superb write!!=)

The moon tells our emotions

Saturn tells our fate

The sun tells our motions

Incredible what we create

I love these lines..very thought provoking. Makes you truly wonder.

[Clarisse Nanoit]

I like this. It has a very earthy feel to it, almost something [forgive me] "new agey". It's really different than my usual taste, but it's a great piece all the same.
KH