'Unreaching The Undesired'
A Poem by
Hello, Goodbye
..forsaking forbidden desires..
I would yearn for it to be a blessing But its a curse that haunts, immensely A vexation that oddly brings a smile It's an obsession that elates me Even if it's entirely betraying And its constant, equal to a sundial It's a heavenly star I can never capture Like a delusion from a cranial fracture It views delicious, but the taste is ever bile - DD
© 2010 Hello, Goodbye
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hey i love it, unique vocabs and voice
Posted 15 Years Ago
Elegant conveying of intense feelings...like it.
Regards,
Posted 15 Years Ago
Elegant conveying of intense feelings...like it.
Regards,
ahh that first bite of the forbidden is ever sweet but how bitter when it spreads its reality inside the essence of being~
your rhyme sequencing is sharp~ metaphorical twists divinely lush~
Posted 15 Years Ago
ahh that first bite of the forbidden is ever sweet but how bitter when it spreads its reality inside the essence of being~
your rhyme sequencing is sharp~ metaphorical twists divinely lush~
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Added on September 9, 2010
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