Dont Have To Be Loved, In order to Love

Dont Have To Be Loved, In order to Love

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..the only barometer you have is your heart..

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Im searching for a certain orchid 
The kind that people call a ghost 
They say that flower: It can change you 
I wonder if it could change my course 

Adaptation, it can sure be a challenge 
The changing of mind, the heart, and soul 
To alter, is almost like a coward 
Forgetting who we were before 

© 2011 Hello, Goodbye


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Wonderful! Great depth of meaning in here... powerful and succinct.


Posted 14 Years Ago


Truth spoken in the fewest words possible. I like that.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple, short, but clear, direct to the point,
I love it a lot! A very true poem,
and the words are filled with power and beauty!
Nice Job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true, remarkable write. I like alot!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very existential poem, especially:

To alter, is almost like a coward
Forgetting who we were before

Your poetry is very direct.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very captivating poem. Nice work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen my friend!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant word play my friend.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 3, 2011
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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

Bobland, NY



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