Soundless

Soundless

A Poem by Mary
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this is an old poem from 7th grade (in 9th grade now.) but these were published in my school magizene...

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Do you listen when I speak?

Is my voice that meek?

Would you hear me if I scream?

Can you hear me over the team?

What am I to do?

Wait for you?

Listen up to what i say.

Hear me today!

I'm soundless, unseen, invisible.

© 2008 Mary


Author's Note

Mary
again... do not coment on error of punctuation, capitilization, and spelling.

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Guess what. You didn't make any mistakes in the poem. In the description, it's magazine.
I like this, but the rhyming seems elementary, but I tend to say that when it's obvious (in some parts) that you're rhyming.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2008

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Mary
Mary

Huntington, NY



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I am a generally happy person... but you wouldn't know that by my poetry... heheheh... ^^' not so good. I'm passionate about my drawing and writing. Did i fail to mention that I am not the most 'org.. more..