Sadness

Anouther old 7th grade poem from the magizene.

A bleak pit of dispair.

Darkness that wouldn't spare.

Heart ache and wounds.

Scars of pain.

All energy drained.

Tears all in vain.

Not a sound.

you feel bound.

The air is thick.

Your heart beats faster.

Now you are sleeping.

When you wake up,

you're weeping.

Author's Note

once again... NO GRAMMER BASSED COMENTS!!!!!!!

Reviews

"A bleak pit of despair" That's a very good metaphor. You clearly made your point; at times we may feel depressed or hopeless. I know I do all the time.

[Lexy]

Awesome, dudette, awesome.