Broken Heart

just something i felt like writing...

I love you

Threw and threw...

I love only you

    Love,

      Your secret admirer

 

 

tears that roll down my cheaks,

All caused by you.

My heart aches with you in mind,

My lips quiver at the same time.

I hate you so much!

Yet i love you all at once...

You hate me... i can tell.

My soal burning inside

To hell with you!!!

But I can't bear to see you burn...

What spell did you cast?

What curse is this?

This pain is entence.

What am i to do?

It makes no sence.

I know this is true...

But, none of it makes sence.

All i need is to be alone...

With everyone but you.

You made me cry...

You are not the first...

But i think yours is the worst.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[Cole =D]

i really like this one too

[Lexy]

Agreeing with William Usry...

I'm ignoring SPELLING problems in this one... but that's because I shouldn't be on the computer right now.

OhmyGod, I love the line "To hell with you!!!/But I can't bear to see you burn..." I would've never thought of that, that's really REALLY clever.

So, enjoy my non-correcting review as I ponder this poem....

[William Usry]

I was surprised to read that you're thirteen...your writing talents far exceed your years. Keep at it and great job!