Thanks

Thanks

A Poem by Mary
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Something i wrote for no reason... I just felt like it...

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It flows out of me,

The way i had not planed.

I ment to be quaint,

Not a screaming moron.

 

I could feel my face get hot.

I knew i was flustard

And i played the fool.

I was starting to choke.

 

You kept your cool.

You tried to help me get through it all.

Helped me get the words out.

Though you knew what i was trrying to say.

 

You never laughed at my atempts.

You never put me down.

You tried to chear me on.

And in the end you still said no...

 

What was it all for?

I was so confused.

Why would you let me ask if you knew,

Did you have your own plan?

 

You gave me courage

This i realize now.

Though it hert at the time.

It's kept me healed now.

 

I wrote this to thank you

I owe you so much.

So much wiser then me.

You knew the end.

© 2009 Mary


Author's Note

Mary
Ignore grammar and spelling problems *That means you Lexy =.=*

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wow mary this is fantastic. seriously

Posted 17 Years Ago


I agree with Alaska Frost! It does sound personal and deep.

BTW, grammar isn't an issue in poetry. Not usually. But, just so you're aware, you had a ton of spelling mistakes.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Great poem!! i know you said that you wrote it for no reason, but while i was reading the poem, i forgot that! it seemed so personal! Good job!

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on January 4, 2009

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Mary
Mary

Huntington, NY



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I am a generally happy person... but you wouldn't know that by my poetry... heheheh... ^^' not so good. I'm passionate about my drawing and writing. Did i fail to mention that I am not the most 'org.. more..