You're just like...

You're just like...

A Poem by Mary
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Once again... i had no reason for this... heheheh... I just get ideas that i have no experience with... SORRY IF IT'S CORNY!!!!!

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You're like a drug

I've never tried you

Yet you get me so high

The scent you give off

Even your heat

 

You're just like the sun

So bright

So warm

You keep me happy

You keep me alive.

 

You're just like chocolate

You are sweet

You make me happy

You tasteso good.

I can only handal you in moderation

© 2009 Mary


Author's Note

Mary
Ignore spelling... LEXY!!! (takes out spears) that means you =.=

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JUST ONE: Handal= handle

I thought this was sweet! Not corny and I know corny.

Trust me.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Very good..
So good, I did'nt even notice the spelling....Does that mean I can't spell too?
Well I never said that I have good grades :-)

Love it
For somebody who writes about their lack of experience, you have good imagination

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on January 5, 2009

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Mary
Mary

Huntington, NY



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I am a generally happy person... but you wouldn't know that by my poetry... heheheh... ^^' not so good. I'm passionate about my drawing and writing. Did i fail to mention that I am not the most 'org.. more..