Fang

Bwahaha... this sounds sexual

So close to my skin

It almost burns

This cold feeling i get

The way that i yurn

I hear my blood rushing out

My knees shivering

My body is not my own

I share it with you

I feel you in me

Though it sounds so wrong

All i know is that it hurt

When you sucked my blood

Author's Note

Ignore spelling

Reviews

[Lexy]

It does sound sexual and I can see the vampire part. Well the "sucked my blood" kinda clued me in. ;)

[Captain Ugly]

Interesting take on the vampire bite experience. I enjoyed.
Just Me.
Captain Ugly.

[Jobbs]

Hmmm a sexual vampire experience? A very well done powerful piece. Seeing more and more of these since Twilight. Coincidence? : )