hello, goodbye

this is a poem dedicated to my loving family. mainly my grandmother and grandpa who have always been their to inspire me. i love you guys

floral scented breeze
upon weeping willow trees
scraped knees
so many memories
home to me
creaky stairs
to draw bridge
to castle within a tree
all memories
of child hood
all a part of me
tears from leaving
tears from my dads deceiving
tears from no longer believing
that life itself could be better
surrounded by love
consumed by happiness
like the house on the hill
consumed by deep green tangles of ivy
im tangled within a family that shall always be beside me
given up
fallen down
always returning from the ground
like the little girl once upon the swing set
a flying high
singing
hello, goodbye
 

Reviews

[starwillow]

Of course, this is my favorite....I thought you may have forgotten. We had so many good times...loving & supporting each other. You are the reason I carried on those years...I miss you, even tho we talk. So many great memories...Thank You, Zoe! Love.

[holyspirit1]

i liked it nice job i am glad you have some good memories of your child hood..

[Annabel Lee]

Amazing!

[Sexy P3nguin]

This is amazing! I loved it all the way through!