oh bleeding heart

my trust a wilted flower

my love never bloomed

sunshine has faced the greatest doom

petals fall, like tear drops

to the ground and never stop

slowly all emotions die

as they become unused and dry

they slowly turn to the ground

no longer do the birds that once fed come around

water left and sunshine ran

so did the fertilizer that left just sand

i have left the flowers of me unaccompanied

so slowly i shall bleed

oh bleedingheart,

what do you need

 

Reviews

[Mjr. Tom]

very entertaining to ready, good job :)

[Sexy P3nguin]

Amazing read. The flow was out of this world and description made my jaw drop. My favorite part is the beginning,

my trust a wilted flower
my love never bloomed
sunshine has faced the greatest doom
petals fall, like tear drops
to the ground and never stop


Amazing job Zoe. LUV YA!
Sexy P3nguin

[Katrina Mckeown]

This is brilliant! great stanza and use of imagery and a joy to read! :-)