just like a pill

without you i am broken,

torn by love withdrawl

with you im incoherent

lost and confused

i dont know anything at all

just a mintue away from you

and i become unamused

my body aches

my head spins

until my high begins again

you are just like a pill

your love and compassion makes me ill

addicted i have become

until my days are done

my skin itches

my vision blurry

you have left me with out a story

just with sweaty skin, red eyes

and a pain that could make anyone cry

you are just like a pill

no matter how close you make me ill

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Description was very good. Love can be a good pill or a bad one?
Coyote

[Sexy P3nguin]

I love the way you made love as a drug. Very creative.Also a very powerful peice. Great job