Another Year

November, I'd decided to pick myself up, 

December, again, I had given up,

January, friendships and hearts were broken, 

February, my eyes were re-awoken, 

March, the lies eventually died, 

April, truth was followed by lies,

May, regrettable revenge was made, 

June, the six months, begun to fade, 

July, I had a lovely holiday, 

August, all the bad thoughts had gone away, 

September, a stepping stone to my career, 

October, the dreaded weekend was almost near,

November, has brung a lot of tears!

Reviews

[Prritiy]

I pray this was it. Now its smiles. Written nicely.

[minnie:)]

perfect write, very different from any other poem I've seen and its very good to :)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

oh sad!!

[Phantom.Bite]

I like the style :) it is really different from what I usually see. I do agree that it loses some of it's power by using lies so much. So, if you use a synonym it will be awesome :)

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you for your review, nice to hear you liked it. I have changed one of the lines so lies doesn't rhyme with lies, unsure how to remove the other lies though?

[Riley Bray]

I really like this poem aside from lies being rhymed with lies, (its also used three time in only two lines). Change that and I think its perfect. X3

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you, I changed the line so lies doesn't rhyme with lies now :)

[Riley Bray]

Awesome.

[zainul]

Amazing report of a year.
Love it.

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you for your review and taking the time to read my poem. :) I am glad you liked it.

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)