beautiful

Blue sky.

fluffy white clouds. 

Warm sunshine. 

A beautiful sight I see as I look above to the sky.

I see only beauty and color.

I look down to the world im in.

I see.

blackness. 

dry dead land.

cold icey wind and rain.

A sight I don't find beauty, a sight I wish not to see.

but..I lay stuck in this world and weep.

but I smile because when I close my eyes

I see nothing,.

only of the beauty the world used to be..

Author's Note

Idk if you're like this? ,is it stupid?

Reviews

[ksbadyal]

Lovely! The physical shape of the poem adds to the wonderful contrast you've portrayed. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I love the final line-so powerful and relatable.
Thank you!
-Kailie

[sheriH 2]

Thank you ksbadyal for your kind review im happy u enjoyed it , I'll make shure
to do the same for some of ur work.
sheriH