Gravitational Pull

I suppose it’s hard

To pick my head up

When everything

Has fallen down

 

And I guess I’ll never

Have the strength

To rise above my fears

To make sure I don’t drown

 

And most days you see

I humbly accept that

I will never be

Above the clouds

 

But some days I get

So damn sick of this

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Author's Note

Any and all comments are appreciated~

Reviews

[Keith LaFountaine]

Nice work, very stylistic in the end (something I'm a sucker for haha). Pretty good tone & pacing throughout. Nice job!

[Julie Morgan]

Thank you!