OutsideSyntax

Posted 10 Years Ago

The difference between hunter and prey(The proverbial wolf and sheep) is routine, behaviour or patterns. A hunter observes his prey and concludes the ability to stalk it consistently through it's behaviour, routine and pattern. People fall prey to their old behavioural and mental patterns because they are unable to stalk them in themselves ruthlessly. Freedom is for wolves not sheep.

Posted 15 Years Ago

No problem, just glad to be of help, my friend. Let me know if you need any help with the structure and such, if you look at my writing, you can tell I love to use weird forms of poetry, just to see what effect it will have, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, the great thing is there is always room for growth and development, and your work just gets better with time. Nerdy, but fun. ;) lol

Posted 15 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, I agree with you that it would be a killer song ;)

Posted 15 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you gave me a heads up on the site, it seems like a good one... I added a few already, like I said I mainly write in accompaniment to the guitar for my own enjoyment, or as a mental exercise of sorts, or to exorcise whatever may be on the mind. Thanks again for referring me to this site, looks like alot of high-caliber, original material to enjoy and no doubt hone my own writing through reading.

Posted 15 Years Ago

glad you joined, can't wait to see your work :)