Nuit Dernire

This is in Franais:

Je vous ai vu avec lui de nouveau la nuit dernière,
J'ai juste été là vous je vous ai vus lutter.

Vous le cerf avez été cassés, de la nuit dernière,
Mais je dois ici qu'affure cela vantent les mérites des sérums bien.

 un ri à l'intérieur comme vous avez crié la nuit dernière,
Masquant à maintenant il semble hors de vue.

 

Je vous ai regardés dans la lumière de la lune la nuit dernière,
et lundi cher je vous ai remarqués un semblé tendu et serré.

 

Je vous aime cher, lundi automobile c"ur la batte vite chaque nuit,
Je vous aime lundi cher et je ne commencerai jamais une lutte.

 

La maman chère Jo laisse descendent au le boyau comme le bon sens auparavant avons vraiment duré la nuit.

Author's Note

Dites-moi s'il vous roulle plat si une chose manque mon Franais est un peu rouill. ^_^
Please tell me if any thing is missing my French'e is a little rusty. ^_^

Reviews

[Bear]

Beautifully expressed with real emotion and hearts intent. I am also glad you didn't try to muddy it with big words as so many poets do trying to make them self sound smart. I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

For those whose French is weak like myself this English translation thanks to Google Translate :~)

I saw you with him again last night,
I just was there you saw me fight.

You the deer were broke, last night,
But I owe here that affronts the merits of the sera well.

A laugh inside like you yelled last night,
Masking to now it seems out of sight.

I looked at you in the light of the moon last night,
And Monday dear I have noticed a tight and tight look.

I love you dear, car monday the bat bat fast every night,
I love you dear Monday and I will never start a fight.

The dear mom Jo lets down at the gut as common sense before we really lasted the nigh

[lauren]

Hi!
I just read your story, and I’m obsessed! Your writing is incredible, and I kept imagining how cool it would be as a comic.
I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d love to work with you to turn it into one, if you’re into the idea, of course! I think it would look absolutely stunning.
Feel free to message me on Discord (laurendoesitall) if you’re interested. Can’t wait to hear from you!
Best,
Lauren

[Ice QueenJen]

Cannot read, maybe next time put both in English and French.

[Ice QueenJen]

can't read French, but I am sure its good.

[deeps]

Can't read french, it's probably amazing since all work is.

[Tai-San]

...I don't understand french, but i put it through the translator i carry around. its extremley good!

[Disco writer]

�crivez tr�s a aim� l'�coulement a aim� le fran�ais c'est tr�s propre et bon.