Alone

A poem about the feelings I use to have.

I feel so alone
Like I am doing this all on my own

To people I am invisible
This pain inside me is becoming unbearable

Everything inside me is telling me to give up
And to be honest I have had enough

There is no hope for my future that I can see
Maybe my time in this world is complete

I wish I could find hope
Because I no longer can cope

 So God if you are there I'm crying out to you
I am ready to be made new

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yes, I completely understand this, I still have some struggles from time to time with these feelings, but I know God has something for me and I can't give up.

Great Job

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you! I have these feelings once in a while too. I always cling to God in these situations.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome. Clinging to God is the only way to feel better I have learned lol

[paul sal.....]

free will was given, take it

[RichGee]

My God...So powerful bro...
I can see where you were at one time...
I'm happy you did not give up...You found our Savior...

[Erik Daniel]

Amen! Thanks so much Rich!

[RichGee]

My pleasure brother

[A. Amos]

ED is this old pieceor new one? If it's new then you know you talk to me bro... I felt sinewy poignant in this poetry...if just a thought then you did very well.. If feelings better talk to someone and you arenever alone..first high power is always with you and second you we are too..thanks

[Erik Daniel]

Thanks man! Its my past feelings though!

[Linda alexander]

I wish I could find hope
Because I no longer can cope
Great write , fully succeeded in expressing the feelings, and the longing to become a new individual, strong write, impressed

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you!

[Linda alexander]

You welcome......

[Madison O'Dwyer]

This poem displays your emotions so clearly, well done :) And be strong. The writerscafe community are here for you

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you! It is past feelings though!

[Madison O'Dwyer]

So glad to hear it :)

[Devesh]

I don't know what inspired this, but please know that you're not alone, you never will be. Stay strong and keep smiling! :)

[Erik Daniel]

I will man! These are feeling I use to have.

[Devesh]

I'm glad they're not there anymore :)