The Onyx - Vena Amoris
A Collection of Verses by Glen Yumang Manese
Of Author, Of Life, Of Love & In The Between Lies Aspirations
The Onyx - Vena Amoris is a
collection of verses, a mixture of author, life,
love and aspirations. The author’s journey
from the Philippines to the United
States, and all the struggles associated
with immigration and starting anew, are
revealed in the pages of this book from
the language barriers to the discovery of
a love for the written word. This book is
a testament that dreams do come true
with time and perseverance. Indeed, those
books that once challenged the author on
his path to becoming an English speaker,
were stepping stones that inspired the
author to become a poet and storyteller.
Additional information on the book at the link below:
I final finished the book and will put the first 40 verses for display here at WritersCafe --- and the book is now offered for purchase --- you can support my work --- as an E-book or book at the link below --- please pass me along to family and friends --- God bless & thank you --- all for your time & patience in this endeavor.
and the before --- just details as the book transition into the present.
Inspiration comes from all of you .Only if others would look into others would they find a reason in themselves to write.
Please note, you do not have to leave a comment, but are welcome to do so if you wish. I am just posting for collaboration with the photographers for my upcoming book: The Onyx – Vena Amoris.
*Due to unfortunate circumstances to the photos not being high resolution and 300DPI. I must look into new pictures for the book. Thanks again for those who read the other verses and time to review. I will post a photo/verse as I get them. I hope this collaboration with the photographers can still be salvaged and move forth with this expedition. Number of photos is (18 of 20) done with 2 more to go, before I can sail my ship forward. A storm is brewing and as captain of this ship. I must find a route away from the storm. I will not let this voyage sink. If so, I will be the last to fall with her to the abyss...
Attention this is your Captain speaking. We are in the clear. I did my own experimenting with every photographer’s photos for the book: The Onyx – Vena Amoris and I fixed the problem. I found out that expanding them helped and then doing a quick fix added life to the pictures. I am not an expert in photography by any means like you guys, but everyone is back in the game. Our ship will set sail into the blue yonder. I did pick others from your works and mismatched a few to make things work. I am in need of 2 more and will do my research for the last two photo/verse. They will all be in black and white. If the illustrations are in full color, the price of the book goes up dramatically. This voyage is going as planned. Please give a shout out and a like on their page. They deserve the credits:
https://www.facebook.com/Lmmnhd
https://www.facebook.com/NiMalleyPhotography
Another location to see my work unedited and less refined back in the year 2009. I wanted to engage in this endeavor. Never too late is now 2013 and counting. I did have another site here on Writers Cafe, but no longer use that profile in quite a long time. I believe I've erased and just lost in the archives.
http://glenyumangmanese.blogspot.com
Time and place to act is now. I have come to embrace both my heritage by right and citizenship. I feel there is a sense of purpose for writing all of these verses. A creative way understands not just the author, but also a reflective mirror to looking at oneself in the glass.
I just happen to be born Filipino. Whether my status is judge on that factor then so be, but relative to the world, we live in. Only when we as a people come together as a collective do we prove to be that what we are as humankind. There is a lot more to learn and yet we are so close-minded by the facts that are right in front for full view. I choose to waste my mind to teach others. There is a rightful place for me to grow and nurture. If be one person at a time.
A publicist, an advertisement and this is my book: The Onyx ~ Vena Amoris. Time is ticking and this will be a reality. Even with all of that on my side, the best one is word of mouth. People will judge the cover and not even look at the content. One thing people do know is how to communicate even if they have never read a page. Makes them want to come back and see what they missed.
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Email: glenyumangmanese@yahoo.com
From this point down are review comments I saved for personal use. Read them/do not read is totally up to you. I understand time is not on your side, but thank you for reading my work.
This genre is on a decline, but I hope to rise to the occasion and let the people decide if poetry is really on a downward spiral or is there a spark that just needs ignited once again. After years of dedication to this, project good or bad. I have achieved no matter what. The decision is at the end of the day. I will never forget how far. I've come in the English language and this is proof of the fact.
One writer/ one reviewer: there is no such thing as a better reviewer. You state your mind and that is the joy of being. The thought process and exploring the unknown factor creates an exploration of knowledge. That all of us carry and few would like to show more in the world we live in. Even at times, we read others here and leave no comment. We leave with something to reflect that verse or story. Excerpt of a write embedded in our minds and that is what makes us improve. Ever-learning is the capacity of wonder. Thinkers of time and space in this ever-growing society we live in. Thanks for your time... That is the most you can ask from a person. Life is short and to know you have taken a moment matters.
You know there was a time when I had a hard time just reading a sentence. Let alone come this far and write a creative thought to paper. I would write down small bits of stuff and hand them to my 3rd grade teacher Mrs. Cercell. What does a kid say who barely knows English? I did my best to scribble something each day. Only because she was someone that resembled my 2nd grade teacher her twin sister Ms. Vance. I did like star stickers, too. Them being beautiful inside and out helped. They put me in remedial English and just did my best to understand. Another interesting fact I had to repeat 1st grade over again not because I did not pass and followed around another student with the same name as me. I did not know the English language well enough to advance. Here I am now in full resolution. Thanks to great teachers for never giving up on me. Time gives back what I have learned.
Glad you found wisdom and love in these verses. What is our art if we cannot let others soak in our thoughts? Our memories are past and present. What is to come as we move closer to the day? When all we are is those written letters of a much beautiful world. We leave behind a legacy to others that continue the path. We left off.
I truly believe one finds a balance with what makes them happy. Even In the event monetary is not as much. Focus to live by is not the bank account. Road for which makes them be content to the fact. Comfort, health and assurance are enough to move on this journey. We call life experience. Trial and error goes hand in hand to the development of who you are and what you want to become. Time is short and living your dream is priority.
This ever-growing world of ours and children next take reign. They develop so much faster and experience events with a click of a button. In turn they teach us more of what we've missed in life. We do our part to guide them in the right direction.
Talent can only get you so far. The rest is living out your creativity. No matter the barriers one must truly have a passion for the art. A man can eat and not be satisfied by the food. Give him the recipe of his dreams. He will be fulfilled for a lifetime.
Mirror is a reflective glass. Only contented image must realize and turn against the ways of misdeeds. No matter how you convey that in the mirror. Your reflection does not change to the person who you have become in life. Healing process is a longer road than the destruction.
Questions are avenues of the soul’s rite of passage. Is there a meaning to all of this rubbish called life? Factor existence of the fabric of your being. You do not breathe and hold. Something inside will let go and make you exhale. You're at an age when doubt comes into play. In time that will come to pass and give direction, which you seek. Meaning of life, the whole truth is a picture not a puzzle of pieces in a box already assembled. Once you put them altogether.
My Review
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"Wind is just an invisible reflection.
In a calendar’s end of days gone by.
Without constant admission is your presence."
When someone come and go just like a wind, then who would not feel bad? I have also made poems about the wind and it's invisibility, so I can fully relate to this.
Nice metaphor, Glen. :)
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Good to see you back here and again thanks for your time...I'm at the last stage of this journey...o.. read moreGood to see you back here and again thanks for your time...I'm at the last stage of this journey...of course divided into parts a-b-and c...hehehe...I actually made this verse with the picture of Salvador Dali...but since I cannot use his representation...the photo above will have to do...there is a big difference...but I have to be creative at times...
I really like your poem "Manilla Skies," Glen. Is it a short autobiography? A baby, thought dead at birth, becomes a man for whom a great prophesy is made. And I believe that prophsesy will be fulfilled. You, and the old man, speak from the heart and well as from the mind. Best of luck to you with your publication. (I will attempt to read others of your poems as time permits.)
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Joyce - thanks for your time and efforts to the contribution of looking and admiring my work...and t.. read moreJoyce - thanks for your time and efforts to the contribution of looking and admiring my work...and through our discussion on emails...and yes I agree with your comment about the old man and me...I just wish I could have thank him now...
I will definitely purchase this book when it comes out, one of my favorite is "Out of Ink" I really like it, it speaks to me because I can see bits and pieces of my soul in those words, the line "I will flow with words of my true imaginary." reminds me of my many alter egos. Love your work.
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Psyche - thanks for the review...and your time to come here...I liked the one you picked...I can go .. read morePsyche - thanks for the review...and your time to come here...I liked the one you picked...I can go back when I wrote that number...Remember the title..."Portal of Envies"...the sequel to this write...I wrote an epic poem to counter..."Out of Ink" a bit long of a narrative read in the book...I would say the longest one...I sent the friend request...
I enjoyed reading these. Didn't make it through all due to length. You have good talent of the pen.
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Eric - no problem...I do not intend for you...to read all of them...I just put the ones that will ha.. read moreEric - no problem...I do not intend for you...to read all of them...I just put the ones that will have a photo/verse in the book: The Onyx Vena Amoris...of mine in a couple months...I wanted to give a variety pack...some like different subject matters...and they can scroll through them and choose, which they like or not...thanks for your time to visit my page and thoughts on my work...
I have read some of your work, it took me to another place. Peace and tranquility on another land. Amongst the adventures a depth of colour and imagery. Wonderful work
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Barb - thanks for your time to read...if others you know like this style...send them along and take .. read moreBarb - thanks for your time to read...if others you know like this style...send them along and take sneak peek at my work...almost done with the first journey with: The Onyx Vena - Amoris...book and now have much time to reflect and do new writings without a rush for time...as many here come and go...if there is something of interest you would like me to read let me know...one poem at a time...
Now worries will do, I am actually thinking of doing my memoirs but do not quite know where to start.. read moreNow worries will do, I am actually thinking of doing my memoirs but do not quite know where to start. I know I have written my life away in poetry. Now trying to branch in imagination, and captivation...One of my favorites is "Yesteryear" I classically linked it to Australian heritage.
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Good to hear and yes...I encourage you to do your memoirs...and branching out is a good thing...brig.. read moreGood to hear and yes...I encourage you to do your memoirs...and branching out is a good thing...brighten like you said the imagination and captivation...and thanks again for the informative on "Yesteryear"...
I enjoyed the structure of his work and you could seek the imagery and emotion that went into its construction. It is very conceived and written. He is a master of the word.
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Thanks for your time...and words of my work...Don...this was the start of an adventure...happy to se.. read moreThanks for your time...and words of my work...Don...this was the start of an adventure...happy to see you here on my page...
Wow each piece has such a depth to it, you're talent in poetry is undeniable. I agree with
Wolfwind Words, each piece speaks to me and touches a part of my inner self.
Magnificent job,
thanks for sharing these wonderful pieces
keep writing!
Mufasa - thanks for your thoughts and time to read my work...I hope I did not make this too overwhel.. read moreMufasa - thanks for your thoughts and time to read my work...I hope I did not make this too overwhelming...by the amount I put on the page...these were all on here at the Cafe...the complete collection at one time...but now with the book in the making...I just choose to put them in one theme...I do not intend one to read all of them in one sitting...but come back now and then to reflect on the whole theme...one might enjoy one and not the other and scroll down to see something of interest...
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It wasn't overwhelming at all, I found each piece enjoyable! Good luck on your book, it sounds spect.. read moreIt wasn't overwhelming at all, I found each piece enjoyable! Good luck on your book, it sounds spectacular :)
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I'm at the tail end of it now...thanks again...it's been a journey...
I could spend weeks going on about how each piece incorporated here made me feel and see in my minds eyes, in my heart, and in my soul... but I shall simply give a two thumbs up and say you're talent is a blessing upon this fine earth and thank you for sharing it with us! =)
Aaron - Wolfwind
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As I say in one of my quotes:
I feel there is a sense of purpose for writing all of th.. read moreAs I say in one of my quotes:
I feel there is a sense of purpose for writing all of these verses. A creative way understands not just the author, but also a reflective mirror to looking at oneself in the glass.
I hope...God willing the journey is just that a stepping stone...and many more lie ahead...thanks for your time - Aaron...
Glen, congratulations on your book! It was a little distracting to see so many things going on when I clicked here. I wanted to see just one poem at a time. It would really give your work a chance to shine if you have them posted separately. That being said, 'Manila Skies' was my favorite. I liked seeing the snippets of your life. The moments when death touched down and then the old man shouting, 'Not this day!' He saw you were meant for more, your journey was not over. You ask, 'How can he acknowledge what cannot be seen?' That is not so hard to answer. He is not looking with his eyes, man. He is looking with his heart. I hope the rest of the editing and the photo issues are ironed out without too much pain. Good luck! Angi~
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Thanks for your time...Angi...I just put them altogether... so I can have an experimental theme here.. read moreThanks for your time...Angi...I just put them altogether... so I can have an experimental theme here and convert the idea into the book...I understand the concern for individual pieces...I'm gong to do that with my new writes...this just give me better access to see them all in one area for the purpose of editing and layout...the entire collection was on here individually...sometime ago...and the following collection after this book...just makes my life easier for now...I hope you understand...
I certainly agree with your sentiments.....There is no point travelling if you do not have an obvious destination to arrive at !
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Thanks for your time - Tom....are you quoting a verse..."Merveille du Jour" is a moth...describing h.. read moreThanks for your time - Tom....are you quoting a verse..."Merveille du Jour" is a moth...describing how it comes into season in September to October...and you have to be patience in order to get a glimpse of them at night...if you're commenting on Marguerite statement...she just like that part of the write:
"Where being on time is a necessity.
Only arrivals make the event worthwhile."
...that's saying you have to be patient in order to see them...since you do not know when the moths will arrive...I hope you got a better idea...please read again...if you have time...
"Where being on time is a necessity.
Only arrivals make the event worthwhile."
I can relate to this. I remembered myself gazing at the window, waiting for someone to come. It's really frustrating when you waited for hours and then finally, a message will tell you that he won't come at that day but on the other day.
T'was a nice read.
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D - thanks for your time to read my work...it's the patience in life...at times we endure to realize.. read moreD - thanks for your time to read my work...it's the patience in life...at times we endure to realize the prize...or person to come into our lives again...
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You're welcome. I'll remember that statement of yours about patience.
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